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Onyx Storm

by Rebecca Yarros

Rated 4 out of 5Alison's rating

The third instalment in the Empyrean series, continuing the story of Violet and Xaden in a world of dragon riders and dark magic.

The Messy Reader verdict

A captivating addition to the Empyrean series

Reviewed 27 January 2025 messyreaderby messyreader Spoiler free

Onyx Storm by Rebecca Yarros is another captivating read that delivers on strong characters within the Empyrean world. Yarros masterfully crafts a world that feels both familiar and utterly unique, immersing readers in the complexities of the Empyrean Guard.

What I loved:

The characters are undoubtedly the highlight. They are flawed, complex, and incredibly well-developed. You'll find yourself rooting for their triumphs and agonizing over their struggles. The chemistry between Violet and Xaden is still electric (spicy read, anyone?), crackling with tension.

The Empyrean universe provides a fascinating backdrop. Yarros brings the world to life with vivid descriptions and a gritty realism that makes it feel authentic. The setting itself adds another layer of intrigue to the story, influencing the characters and their relationships in unexpected ways.

What I was less obsessed with:

As with the other books in this series, Onyx Storm ends on a frustrating cliffhanger. While it leaves you eager for the next installment, it can be a bit jarring and leave a sense of unfinished business. I would've loved a little closure in some of the plot points!

The story could have benefited from some judicious editing. At times, it felt a bit drawn out, and it could easily have been 50-100 pages shorter without sacrificing the core plot or character development.

Overall:

Despite the minor drawbacks, Onyx Storm is a solid addition to the Empyrean series. Yarros's talent for creating compelling characters and immersive worlds shines through, making it a captivating read for fans of military romance.

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